Arome de l'amour
by Larry Chamberlin Sep 4, 2012
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The air is heavy with your perfume |
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12 years ago
What a beautiful short poem :)
First, I love the title, it attracted my eye. I love how you started this poem, I could really feel everything you wrote.. and I remember smelling someone's perfume in the air and how strong it is. I like how the perfume pulls you to this person. I had to look up the word nascent, and I absolutely loved the meaning. This poem was almost like "love at first scent or smell" lol, and I like that.. love at first sight is too cliche, so this was a nice idea.
Really enjoyed this! Great job :)-
12 years ago
Thanks, Sara.
I used "ardor" and "nascent" both for their own meanings and also as visual/aural allusions to "odor" and "nasal"-"scent," thereby subliminally strengthening the aroma factor.
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12 years ago
by Meme
Hahaha, tis cool hon. Was being sarcastic all the way :P
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12 years ago
by Sunshine
Haahah larry i dont like calling you that it was a couple of times :p
lol meme Im only joking -
12 years ago
by Meme
Ohh sorry Ms Nana, I never knew that was a copyright! lol
Plus, I never read that from you. I called him that the first time I pmed him. -
12 years ago
by Sunshine
Sir larry.. ? why are you all other daughter so jealous of me, for your information you and Noura plagiarized THAT, I was the 1st to call him so :( but I was joking, he's my buddy :P
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12 years ago
Is this fighting over "Sir Larry"?
How about if every calls me "Larry"?
Or "Lar-Bear" per Jane
Or @&%(@$ per my brother
or old fart per my dog
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