by Stephen Sep 4, 2012
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
You're eccentric compared to loves of my past. |
by Xanthe
This is beautifully-penned, Stephen. The personification of rain has been done a lot of times but youve used it as your own here. The calm, sincere tone you've used throughout works really well with the context of tbe piece. |
by Brittany C
Wasn't my favorite but it wasn't bad. Didn't really know what you were talking about until you said what it was. Other than that It wasn't a bad read. 4/5 |
by M I L L Y
When i started reading this poem i looked at the category twice. you can easily get confuse. i can't pick a favorite line because i love it all. and i feel the same way about the rain. i love love rain. and i really really like your poem. too strong and deep to be speaking about rain. 5/5 |
This is such a beautifully written piece. |
by Maple Tree
I am a huge Nature freak....... love to write it and read it.. You have penned a beautiful love poem about rain.. the madness of rain and just a beautiful word display ....sighs.... this was a gorgeous piece!! |