The worst, is best on the wrong side. Things go wrong, to turn good at last.

I love this poem and all the descriptive words. you set the mood very well. good job.

Horrible when bad news reaches you over the phone. All you can do is listen and collapse when the line finally clicks.

You captured that feeling of hopelessness very well in this poem

This is somehow quite darker than melancholy... I was thrilled while reading! Great job.

The emotion in the poem is very powerful. I could easily picture myself as that man; that sad feeling turning to numbness. Losing someone and receiving such devastating news through a phone call is very depressing. Very well written.