Don't say...

by AllyKat   Sep 5, 2012


Don't say we're done
Don't say you give up
My heart can't take that ache
For the blade and I will meet once again
I still love you and always will
I don't mean these mean things I've said
I only want you here with me
Forever and ever is what we've said
It seems it's come to an end
So my life is now dead

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Super poem, you are knocking the socks of here, sweetness blended with facing the hard stuff, well written
    Br
    Ole

    • 12 years ago

      by AllyKat

      Thank you guys =]. I kinda feel like my mind is opening up a bit more lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I do know how much you love her, that is seen on your face daily... The poem shows your rawest of feelings pouring out and its very deep.. I like the way you formatted this poem... its very nice... and I'm proud of you for writing again... it helps to get those feelings out doesn't it? love you <3

  • 12 years ago

    by AllyKat

    Thank you =]

  • 12 years ago

    by AllyKat

    Thank you =]

  • 12 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I love how you wrote this poem^_^
    i can feel youe true feeling, great job:)

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