I love how you wrote this poem^_^
i can feel youe true feeling, great job:)

Thank you =]

Thank you =]

I do know how much you love her, that is seen on your face daily... The poem shows your rawest of feelings pouring out and its very deep.. I like the way you formatted this poem... its very nice... and I'm proud of you for writing again... it helps to get those feelings out doesn't it? love you <3

Super poem, you are knocking the socks of here, sweetness blended with facing the hard stuff, well written
Br
Ole