Good poem I really like the strong feelings here. I do feel if you would've lay this poem out differently it could've been better, but with that being said I think it's a good write and that you feelings are strong here and that what makes it a good poem.

These are my feelings too!!! very touching!!

Beautiful piece! It needs to be reviewed for some grammar mistakes but it holds a powerful sad emotion that makes us look beyond grammar.. Nice:)

This is sad, and yet beautiful, Ravi.
I enjoy reading this piece. Keep up the good work!