Long road ahead

by sun spots   Sep 5, 2012


I think of her all day long,
and text her once or twice.
Ending my text with i love you,
she is far more than just nice.
All the problems that she carries,
i will help her with that load.
Now that we are together,
and have chosen our own road.
The way ahead is difficult,
with problems in the way.
But we can solve those problems,
and they become less everyday.
I won't give her up this time,
the way i did long ago.
Today is our tommorow,
and we will be there this i know.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jake

    WOW i reallly really like this :')

    Very good word choice and leads in a good order by mentioning the problems to the solution of the problems.
    Its very sweet and rhymes perfectly.

    I would advise you though,
    that if you separate the different stanzas it can help someone to read it better. Just press enter after each stanza and it will make it look better too :)

    • 10 years ago

      by sun spots

      Hello Jake, thanks for your comments. Although i have written many poems i only started a couple of years ago and i have written quite alot in that time so its still all pretty new to me. Forgive my ignorance but what are stanzas.

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