by Stephen Sep 6, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Tonight you appeared at my bedside; |
by Aubrey
This is really good....I like it:) |
This piece really... and I mean REALLY, touched me. Recently my father told me he had a dream... of my mother laying in bed with him (She passed away) ... and that when he woke up, he thought she was still there...he reached for her, and she wasn't. It has literally broke my heart. ... and this poem just brought me back to him telling me that, seeing the look on his face...the heartache. |
by L
This is a love poem that leaves me sad. |
by Baby Rainbow
Haha, I was so disappointed when this poem ended... part 2???? |
by Amreen
I got carried away with this as if I am reading some story, soooo beautiful... The imageries kept the pace alive throughout... You are sooo talented my friend... I didnt even realised that It didnt rhymed... It didnt actually bother me.... Cuz the flow was just amazing...:) |