Nicely written........ last 8 line awesome

Wow this is so very dark, yet it shines beautifully because of your talent!! I loved reading it, Your descriptions were vivid, as I could imagine everything happening stanza by stanza.

Letting the joker queen out to the world ,
For they would only see a woman not yet broken down,
While I kept the lie up with every strenth I had in me

This is my favorite part of the poem.. I love how you write "letting the joker queen out to the world, for they would only see a woman not yet broken down."...

To me, this basically expresses you putting up a fake persona to the world so that everyone around does not know how hurt you truly are.. Great poem, amazing expression and details..

Awww, I think this is really amazing.

The first couple of stanzas read like a diary entry and (for me) lacked some flow and poetic zest. I liked your emotion and get what your trying to convey, but I like my poems a bit more abstract and not so trite. Just not my style...4 stars. thanks for sharing

Another enjoyable piece, too bad wine doesn't cure anything though! Except momentary blues...they always return! lol