First off I am sorry you are going through this and I believe no-one has the right to make you feel so low. You may not realise it but you are strongest when you feel that you are at your weakest. I cannot stop anyone bullying you but one day you will leave school and life will go on and hopefully you won't be scarred too much by the experiance of being bullied.

As for your poem I liked how you wrote in way that allows other to relate and connect with your situation. However I also felt the poem wasn't worded as well as what it could of been. But it is your choice on if you want to make changes to it.

Over all I like this piece it is very raw just wasn't worded as well as it could have been in places.

Still I admire you for writting about a situation you find difficult and for that reason alone 5/5

Another nice one........... i love it