I enjoyed reading this poem, it is well written.. in places the ryhmes didnt flow too well but its a hard thing to do.

I was left wondering what this piece is about.. i have 3 things mind.. left we pondering which is a good thing =)

The stansa was byfar the best imo

"Why do we shout?
So people will hear
And why do we scream?
Perhaps we feel fear
Why do we fight?
Sometimes it all just takes its toll
And why do we bite?
Perhaps we just lose control"

It just drew me in and i wanted to keep reading. The different feelings left me wanting to read on

Overall a good piece, rhyming is hard!
both of you keep it up!
5/5 from me

This was literally a "Poetic Game" in one of the dicussion forums - The questions provided - the answers to be filled in. It was a whole heap of fun. I didn't even know where the piece was going until I finished - but I really liked it and asked if we could use it as a collab. (;

Thanks so much for your comment.

Oh I do still love rhyming poems! This was no exception, very nice work both of you, hope this won't be the last from you.

Nice collab of you two! I really support the question-and-answer style poems. It gives you the impression to get new knowledge. Well done.

A stong poem that is emotionally charged. I liked how you the poem gained power as it went on.

5/5