Out Camp

by Larry Chamberlin   Sep 7, 2012


Branches gently scratch the roof of my tent
as breezes filter softly through the trees
bringing scents of moisture, dust and cattle
wafting through the mesh like dream catcher sieves.

First one up, as always; pre-dawn buzz of
bugs and birds in dances devotional,
whether chased or eaten music prevails:
wooded abbey matins emotional.

There are embers down beneath the ashes
blown into a cookfire hot for coffee
not ready for any bacon, the smell
would wake up everyone; peace to be.

Coffee mug and folding chair sit perched high
above a cliff over the water fall,
watching the sun rise across the chasm
ambered moment left alone with it all.

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  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Wow, wow, wow. Nominated tomorrow for suuuuure. Blown away, love this. Just....amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Aaron

    I love this poem because the words painted a very descriptive picture, but not only that it felt like I was there smelling the coffee in the air and hearing the bugs. I too like how the stanzas had a rhyme.

    Great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Something Diabolical

    Amazing poem larry

    normally this is the part wherei would pick out ways you could improve this piece but i wouldnt change a thing. Nice flow and ryhme in each stanza.
    The imagery and wording was instense!
    i could actually smell the description lol

    keep it up
    5/5 from me

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