Amazing poem larry

normally this is the part wherei would pick out ways you could improve this piece but i wouldnt change a thing. Nice flow and ryhme in each stanza.
The imagery and wording was instense!
i could actually smell the description lol

keep it up
5/5 from me

I love this poem because the words painted a very descriptive picture, but not only that it felt like I was there smelling the coffee in the air and hearing the bugs. I too like how the stanzas had a rhyme.

Great poem

Wow, wow, wow. Nominated tomorrow for suuuuure. Blown away, love this. Just....amazing.