You were my Destiny

by LittleMermaid   Sep 8, 2012


Years have passed, yet memories remain the same
My heart still pounds on hearing your name
Unsaid story of yours and mine
Hidden story of love that couldn't shine

My first sight, you dressed in black and red
Those innocent eyes and smile perfectly made
Our very first handshake and nervous greetings
And those shy glances on accidental meetings

Sensible man, as always you were
You made me realize things I was never aware
Precious most, amongst so many
Adorable, you were my destiny

Forbidden was our love, for people to offend
Wise would be for us, to make an end
And here I am, to move on my own
My treasure, my destiny, you're forever gone

But we managed, and stood really strong
We still smile and have learned to move along
I know, with time, every wound will heal
But you won't be replaced for the way I feel.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Areeba

    While reading this i was just thinking-> this is the story of my life :(
    so sad and yet bful.. I couldnt stop myself frm crying after reading this :'( it touched my heart.
    this is a masterpiece, i believe

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    You are a perfect poet. You are really brave. Keep writing. You are exceptional and outstanding.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    It's all amazing!

    As I like this in particular too..

    "Our very first handshake and nervous greetings
    And those shy glance on accidental meetings"

    Keep it up..

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Awh this poem has my heart completly!!! i mean i've had this COUNTLESS time so i know the pain in this poem it's a bittersweet pain tho...5/5

    Queen Ash!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    There was a tinge of sadness when I read the title. It sort of hinted regret.
    My only suggestions would be, as Ingrid stated, the "the same" and I think you could change glance to glances. Otherwise.this was well-written.

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