by LostWords Sep 8, 2012
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Pardon me, do you realize |
by Alanis
Another job well done! But this line "Falling closer away from you" shouldn't it be falling further away from you?. The ending wasn't gripping to me but that's just my opinion. A wonderful poem with an excellent plot. A lot of good ideas in this poem. |