Piano

A dude that can play the piano melts my heart. It's just a really attractive quality to me, lol.

I love how you used the piano as a metaphor of a relationship. That if the strings are broken, needs tuning, etc... you WILL fix it no matter what kind of repairs is needed. Very sweet and touching.

This is so good, you presented a lot of good imagery using your metaphors here and I enjoyed reading the story.

Well done.

@_@!!!!

What the ****!!!

Holy ****!!!

I actually cant comment properly on this piece thomas your so god damn creative within this piece....youve really raised your game with your last writings .....and its great to see :-)

Awesome write bud!

So between the really neat metaphor, I must say I love what you were trying to convey. That even in the midst of the music sounding horrible, because of broken strings or tuning, you know it needs fixed, and not IF you fix it, but when , youre music will be right again making even Mozart jealous. So basically, youve reached of rough patch in the relationship and youre willing to do whatever to fix it, that way you can go on loving and making sweet sounds the way it should be.

Loved it! :)

You know, I keep telling you how you are gifted with this rhyming scheme and how easy your verses can be translated into songs, But that never gets old, Look @ this, A beautiful love story, one that is simple, and straight to the point

5/5 bro, I honestly love this