Oh mercy this is tender and sweet.... I love the metaphor and the message.

My interpretation: You are wanting to get things back on track with the one you love so that the relationship can be one beautiful song.... sighs... this is an elegant and simplistic along with loving way to inscribe your hopes and wishes and at the end you reassure her of how much you love her, and this is just something that needs to be repaired... Oh I love this poem Thomas! well done!

Oh Thomas Thomas Thomas, what have you done here?!

This is so sweet and melodic, I love the idea of it so much. Piano is such an amazing musical instrument, its my favorite actually, but you managed to use it very well in this piece. The metaphors were spot on with the tuning part and the false note. But what I loved was the mentioning of one of the greatest Pianist "Mozart" that just added so much to the poem.

Love the image this poem gives.
Keep it up T ;)

I love love love the Piano and wish I could play it, will probably try and learn it one day as I can already read notes lol.. anyways, my love for Pianos probably brought me here, but I still think that you could use a more powerful title... maybe something like "Our composition"? Just a suggestion. :)

This poem lacks one major thing, which matters heaps to me and that is punctuation, you've placed a comma here and there, but I would prefer if you had punctuated it completely.

I feel that even though our styles are different that both of us prefer using simple words(and I do not mean that negative at all) I rather think that it helps the reader relate to the poem more and understand what the author is trying to convey. I mean you're using metaphors just like other authors, but I can gladly say that I usually get them, which is really important to me. Since they can be oh so beautiful, but it isn't all that good if the readers don't get it.

I also felt that the idea about incorporating music into your poem was really smart, I generally like it when the different kind of arts are combined and you did a good job at that.. at times I had prefered if the emotions were even stronger, but that's just me.

Keep it up and if you needed help with punctuating this, just let me know :)

You know, I keep telling you how you are gifted with this rhyming scheme and how easy your verses can be translated into songs, But that never gets old, Look @ this, A beautiful love story, one that is simple, and straight to the point

5/5 bro, I honestly love this

So between the really neat metaphor, I must say I love what you were trying to convey. That even in the midst of the music sounding horrible, because of broken strings or tuning, you know it needs fixed, and not IF you fix it, but when , youre music will be right again making even Mozart jealous. So basically, youve reached of rough patch in the relationship and youre willing to do whatever to fix it, that way you can go on loving and making sweet sounds the way it should be.

Loved it! :)

@_@!!!!

What the ****!!!

Holy ****!!!

I actually cant comment properly on this piece thomas your so god damn creative within this piece....youve really raised your game with your last writings .....and its great to see :-)

Awesome write bud!

This is so good, you presented a lot of good imagery using your metaphors here and I enjoyed reading the story.

Well done.

A dude that can play the piano melts my heart. It's just a really attractive quality to me, lol.

I love how you used the piano as a metaphor of a relationship. That if the strings are broken, needs tuning, etc... you WILL fix it no matter what kind of repairs is needed. Very sweet and touching.