by DarkLight Sep 8, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
The peace. |
by anand singh
I love this piece my friend. It's reality based and I like the honesty in every word. Hate I have always carried on my shoulders, |
by Midnight Sky
I like this because all you want is peace and the way you find it here is death good write here p&l midnight sky |
This poem has great potential. The format threw me off a bit as well as some of your wording. It felt unnatural. I do however find it refreshing that you are trying out brevity here. It is powerful and deep. |
by Love Fallacy
Really enjoyed reading this. It is something I'm not used to reading, but found it fun. I liked the imagery and details you utilized throughout. |
by DarkLight
Am happy you enjoyed reading it. |
by Amy
This is beautiful! You are an amazing writer!! So lovely to read! |
by DarkLight
Thanks Amy |