This is good..the message is nicely portrayed..the flow is also improving
in love, fear is inevitable..fear of being hurt, rejected, abandoned but despite these we must never be afraid to love again because pain is part of love..every heartbreak can be repaired and each correction can make us better

Goodbye to love
Romance and all
Better this way
Than to have another
Heartache on me befall

I really like this part as it is very relatable. Everyone have been hurt in love at least once and sometimes that hurt is so painful that you would rather just close up your heart and never love again. A good piece of work!