Feel The Same

by LostWords   Sep 8, 2012


Staring at the worthless girl
looking back at her.
Smashing the reflection
to catch the pieces as
they fall to the floor.
Shards of life taunt her.
She rips open all the pain,
deeper and deeper until
everyone who has hurt her
feels the same.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Understanding comes, through some pain. Against all odds, victory abounds.

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      I appreciate your comment DeviousCharmer.

      Marvellous, thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Love it , just love it, thats all i can say , def one of my favorites on here

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Wow, what anger in this.

    You definately have the talent for cramming so much emotion into so few words, I love the imagery from this piece and it flowed really well.

    awesome job

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you.

      These comments really mean a lot.

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Feel the same.... Wow. This poem gives me chills. Perhaps it is because the way you wrote it is very honest and you do not attempt to hide your frustration and bitterness at those who had hurt you. There is one line that strikes me "shards of life taunt her". I immediately pity the girl in the poem as the torture she is going through in life is not something that she can avoid. Living is what that is killing her. Really really good emotions and feelings that are expressed in your writing.

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you for the comment. Im new to this site. I was feeling a bit lost, so i turned here and signed up. It is more than just writing poetry and keeping it to yourself. You let everyone get the chance to read it, like exposing your diary. I love to express my feelings through words. Here, is a great place to start. I love the welcome.
      Again, thank you for the comment. I take it to heart. You understood exactly what I was trying to get across.

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