I Can't Be Yours

by LostWords   Sep 9, 2012


There is no flaw in two,
as a lily among brambles
so is my love with you.

Draw me close; let us run.
How beautiful is your love,
my other one.

On my bed by night I sought.
I am beyond sick with love
but found him naught.

No matter how loud I scream,
anxiety humming birds come
with a beautiful growl for peace.

Because my perfect one is not a he.
Instead, she is the girl of my dreams.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I understand this completely!!! I would not judge you whatsoever, we all have jumbled thoughts. I love this poem :) I can relate to it in many ways

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      I am so glad everyone understands. This is my first attempt to expressing how I really feel. Thank you for not judging and relating so much to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Hey girl, I dont think that a someone should be called names just because she is expressing her thoughts. I think this is flowing with genuine emotions and who cares what other people think. Our poems are outlets for us to vent our frustrations and no one should take that away from us. So carry on writing and this is a nice poem!

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Much appreciated. I take what you say to heart.

  • 12 years ago

    by Formidable Muse

    I totally feel this. I'm wondering what you meant by your comment? I don't think you need to be labeled by your writing. When you feel something like this being able to put it into words is always hard, yet it feels like a pull being lifted once you are finished. I think it was well written (:

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      I'm glad I'm not the only one. You are right I shouldn't be labeled by my writings. Thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    Struggling with thoughts...call me what you want.

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