by Jess Sep 9, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
first love
Today I kissed a stranger, |
This is the second time i have read this poem and it still doesn't fail to amaze me. I loved the simple lyrical content and the elaborate rhyming scheme that you have applied to this poem. Good job!! |
by Baby Rainbow
Nice work, I liked how it told a story of a memory but perhaps a vague memory due to alcohol. also liked the repitition, I am a fan of that in poetry. |