Sensitive

Wow... I was blow away...by such blunt truth...i think it nice that your are senative...i dont see that alot..it refreashing:).....great poem:)

My fav lines...
"Please help me strengthen
my very foundation

So I can survive the days
without everyones consolation"
A very true & honest poem...
Good piece!

Here it is, d best part of ur poem.

So that these things don't stick
and infect my sanity
soil my fragile personality
reduce my visions clarity

Like a straw house
I can collapse..

Gud ,thomas..

A well written piece with. Important values

Dude this is an awesome write :-)))

Being a sensitive guy is harder than what people think eh? I know that one well, a great man once told me ' to be a good man you must be caring and passionate but never weak' i have to say i think thats a good analogy. And thomas you are all these things even if you dont see it, the rest of us do :-)

5/5 all day long my friend :-)