Very well done guys!

Reading poetry in someones eyes sounds like having a connection with someone on a deeper level. Hope I can experience that one day :)

Excellent partnership on such a magnificent piece. I absolutely love the flow between each part and how coherent it all is. It's almost hard to believe that two authors worked on this, because it is just so well done. The word choice was wonderful and the style amazing. Fantastic job on creating one strong voice in this piece as well as mastering how to make it seem as though there was only one author.

Wonderful!

Great job you two, keep it up xx

Great collab, I love the repition in the first line, puts real emphasis on the fact you feel that you are not quite there yet.

'wait for me' I love this line, almost pleading.

the whole thing works really well.

Thanks guys :-) and meme, its been a while but i still love collabing with you xxx

Such an amazing writing. love it