Amreen (Haikus)

I often find it very difficult to do friendship poems, but you've done a great job here! I only have one suggestion.

"Hope I'll be
as much kindhearted
as Amreen"

`I'm thinking the second line doesn't quite roll off the tongue as well as it could. Perhaps something like..

"Hope I'll be
just as kindhearted <--- still 5 syllables. :)
as Amreen"

Hope this helps!

5/5

`Briana

Aww.. this is a sweet dedication to Amreen.

She is a sweet girl and you described her well here. Thank you for the note.

I counted as usual, and yup, it's 3-5-3.
well done.