Wow, this is amazing. I mean for it being so short and defiantly seemingly simple it has so much emotion. So much heartrending emotion. The descriptions are absolutely stunning. Your words are so average, yet they hold so much power, it is almost unbelievable. I love how clear the tone of the piece is. The strength of the voice behind the words is also an amazing skill that seems mastered in this piece.

5/5 wonderful job.

Awwww this holds a huge amount of sadness, it touched me. Every poem written has a story behind it, this one has a tragedy behinds it.

Perfectly written, great job<3

I don't think that sadness can stop you from writing since you are a fountain of inspiration.

Very good write here Maple, keep it up ;)

This is heart breaking andrea
5/5

Another one from you which is filled with sadness but expressed in such a talented way.

never stop writing.