Is the meaning that when love puts a halt to disappointment then the heart falls? Perhaps that loss of expectations helps the heart grow, so that getting what you expect may not be good for you. In other words, complacency is anathema to true appreciation for love - you cannot understand or know when love is real unless you have had your share of heartbreak. |
by Baby Rainbow
Very true Meme, very true. xx |
by Chelsey
Incredibly deep meme. How you can do that in 3 short lines is amazing. This poem speaks such truth and I feel like those who love hard, or have been in love and let down will get so much out of this senryu. . Awesome write. |
by Thomas
Nicely done. |
by Meme
Thanks a lot for the comments guys. |
by Stephen
Aw this just brings people back to the disappointments they've faced in the world of love. Such true and powerful words in three short lines of poetry. Who hasn't suffered at the hands of love? What hurts the heart more then a heartbreak, whether it be a lost lover, or a lost family member.. This is wonderful, great job here Meme, keep it up!! |
by L
Meme.... |