Comments : Love Conquers (Senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Is the meaning that when love puts a halt to disappointment then the heart falls? Perhaps that loss of expectations helps the heart grow, so that getting what you expect may not be good for you. In other words, complacency is anathema to true appreciation for love - you cannot understand or know when love is real unless you have had your share of heartbreak.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Very true Meme, very true. xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Incredibly deep meme. How you can do that in 3 short lines is amazing. This poem speaks such truth and I feel like those who love hard, or have been in love and let down will get so much out of this senryu. . Awesome write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Nicely done.

    Love makes us blind for some things but we should not give into that.
    If a person hurts you you shouldn't accept it because he says he loves you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Thanks a lot for the comments guys.
    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Stephen

    Aw this just brings people back to the disappointments they've faced in the world of love. Such true and powerful words in three short lines of poetry. Who hasn't suffered at the hands of love? What hurts the heart more then a heartbreak, whether it be a lost lover, or a lost family member.. This is wonderful, great job here Meme, keep it up!!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Meme....

    What did you just wrote?

    I'm guessing that by curbs you mean restrain...

    so yeah, when love tries to prevent disappointment, it means that one has taken a real fall meaning that one got hurt badly because one loved someone so much and faced disappointment when the love ended, perchance?