by Ole Carsten Sep 10, 2012
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
You walk in beauty, colored like the night, |
by Stephen
Love this, especially for the fact of it's rhyming, also for the fact it's about love. You express the sweetest moments of love exceptionally here. You can feel the love you share for the person this is written about. It's beautiful. I believe all love fears goodbyes, but one cannot dwell on the negative when there is so many beautiful and positive emotions in the heart and mind.. Focus on the love you have, great piece here. I enjoyed reading it.. |
by Thomas
Very well written Ole! |
by Baby Rainbow
Beautiful poem, filled with a lot of emotion and it is like a journey of a love story written with such beautiful words and imagery. Well done. |
by Ole Carsten
From time to time these sign are popping in, don't know why? I corrected it, smiling |