Beautiful poem, filled with a lot of emotion and it is like a journey of a love story written with such beautiful words and imagery. Well done.

This line in your last stanza has a symbol at the end which you need to delete..

In dreams we are standing at clouds with angels,¨

Other than that, it was a joy to read.

Very well written Ole!

You used the rhyming scheme perfectly so that it never gets boring.
Love is such a beautiful emotion. We should cherish every moment of it before it dies out.

Love this, especially for the fact of it's rhyming, also for the fact it's about love. You express the sweetest moments of love exceptionally here. You can feel the love you share for the person this is written about. It's beautiful. I believe all love fears goodbyes, but one cannot dwell on the negative when there is so many beautiful and positive emotions in the heart and mind.. Focus on the love you have, great piece here. I enjoyed reading it..