Comments : With A Knock On My Heart

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    For you are the one for me
    I just hope you can see
    That I want no other but you
    My love for you is true

    This part makes me go awww. This is so sweet and somehow brought an ache to my heart. For it just sucks if your other half cannot see how in love you are with them. Really like the flow as well as the beginning,

    With a knock on my heart
    I did let you in

    You did a good job in telling the readers that love had silently but surely found its way into your heart. Nice poem!