by Aaron Sep 10, 2012
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Hand in hand, bodies atop the car |
by X Harlea X
This was very lovely. Camaping themes are always captivating. Your word flow was excellent and it was just overall a great read. Good job :) (5) |
by Tara Kay
I enjoyed the camping theme we had going...and you wrote this really well. A love story that told another story really well. |
by Amy
The story is very captivating and the imagery you used in this poem became so alive in my mind. |