The story is very captivating and the imagery you used in this poem became so alive in my mind.

I enjoyed the camping theme we had going...and you wrote this really well. A love story that told another story really well.

I like your varied style, it is nice to change things up now and again.

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This was very lovely. Camaping themes are always captivating. Your word flow was excellent and it was just overall a great read. Good job :) (5)