Comments : Fear of the Unknown

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Wow Chels! This poem reminds me of my relationships and how hard it was to fully commit to them. I think for me it was because people abused my trust and that affected every relationship I had after that. It is a hard thing to completely trust someone after you have been lied to or treated badly. I love what you have written here, the rawness and emotions can be felt.

    I alwyas love your poems and this one is no exception!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Mixere feelings after Reading this, i rally like this poem, it is a strong one, like always from you

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Mixere feelings after Reading this, i rally like this poem, it is a strong one, like always from you

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    @_@!

    Cant.......breath.......back ......later.....xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow Chels, I really think you poured your heart into this one, I relate a bit to this one, especially to the title and the relation to what it means. Your wording was good and interesting which kept me reading for mroe and I was feeling such empathy towards the end. I like how you ended it by saying you show your feelings in your writing, like its your safety net. Something many people can relate to.

    Nice work xx

  • 12 years ago

    by UNDER WHAT CIRCUMSTANCE

    Wow this poem i can really relate to. I'm going thru the exact same thing nd um so afraid of will happen when I open up.... I agree to what you said that you will keep the I love you's in poetry...... I love this poem