by Lioness
Wow Chels! This poem reminds me of my relationships and how hard it was to fully commit to them. I think for me it was because people abused my trust and that affected every relationship I had after that. It is a hard thing to completely trust someone after you have been lied to or treated badly. I love what you have written here, the rawness and emotions can be felt. |
by Ole Carsten
Mixere feelings after Reading this, i rally like this poem, it is a strong one, like always from you |
by Ole Carsten
Mixere feelings after Reading this, i rally like this poem, it is a strong one, like always from you |
by Naughtymouse
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by Baby Rainbow
Wow Chels, I really think you poured your heart into this one, I relate a bit to this one, especially to the title and the relation to what it means. Your wording was good and interesting which kept me reading for mroe and I was feeling such empathy towards the end. I like how you ended it by saying you show your feelings in your writing, like its your safety net. Something many people can relate to. |
Wow this poem i can really relate to. I'm going thru the exact same thing nd um so afraid of will happen when I open up.... I agree to what you said that you will keep the I love you's in poetry...... I love this poem |