Comments : Shadows

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Chancing a glance behind at loved ones
    Feeling as desolate as the last leaf on a tree
    in the coldest winter before it billows
    slowly to the ground

    ^ There was a contest in my club going on, and I was inspired to write a poem because I read this stanza in specific.

    I think there was a lot of hope in the 1st round for a better ending, but this was one of those pieces that weren't sure of a pink sky in the end.

    "destiny is uncertain and tomorrow may not come"

    This is what I mean.
    Honestly, this wasn't your best piece in the game, but still, I liked it much!