Predator

by Jenni Marie   Sep 11, 2012


*Written for Abed's Hunger Games Contest Round Two*

Haunting flashbacks parade through thy mind,
of a biting Siberian night,
where prey never did stand a chance,
for it haplessly ran straight into a predator's jaws.

Air was chilly, while the night was hostile;
and the little lost lamb was led towards certain slaughter
stumbling in unabashed terror, unable to find even footing,
heartbeat rapidly rising

while the predator crouched in preparation,
like a lion stalking it's next meal.

Adrenaline abundantly mounting, claws curled; terrifying teeth bared,
readily waiting and willing to impale such a tiny, little lonely lost lamb.

Somewhat apprehensive, yet ripe to terminate,
as heavy raindrops splattered to turbid ground;
while a howling wind crashed all around,
causing temporary deafness and blindness for both
such an unequal opportunity, as they plummeted into one another;

a hastily grabbed, garbled and gambled opportunity,
for the lost lamb felt it's bones fractured fragments
silently splintering, letting out a bellowing agonized shriek,
quickly crumbling to the muddy floor.

Letting out a feral ferocious, guttural growl, shiny spiky teeth bared
mane flying freely in bitter wind, eyes large with lust and greed,
as the puissant predator lowered his unyielding form;
tearing into the lamb's throat.

Watching the life slowly drain into nothingness,
little lamb twitching, soaring fear,
while the lion hungrily tore apart his victim's flesh,
no part untouched
twitching, tossing, jerking;
Still.

Eyes clenched tightly shut,
as the images filter maddeningly slowly across thymind
Never asked for this, only it's kill or be killed;

...

and that lion was me.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    It looks now more comfortable to the eyes :P

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "I don't know why the poem looks like this, maybe you submitted it through your phone? Please fix it :P"

    Jeez, you're bossy :D

    I talk ALOT. That's why it looks like this..I had a small space to work with :( haha.

    Hopefully it looks/flows better now I edited a little!

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Jenni, you wowed me with this piece. You have well defined your title: predator. We will know in the end that this predator is the lion, or YOU. Your analogy was really enticing. Your diction, too. And your detailed style successfully shaped the narration of the murder which was well-thought of.

    It was an original step, using 'lion' vs. 'lamb'. If I didn't know the rules of the game, I wouldn't have expected the ending, for you spoke indirectly about what the prey & the predator did through the whole plot.

    Only in the end, we'd get to know who is the lion and who was the lamb.

    I don't know why the poem looks like this, maybe you submitted it through your phone? Please fix it :P

    This is one of the finest dark pieces I have ever read on PnQ. I truly loved it, and I think it's your best one in the game!

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