Jenni, you wowed me with this piece. You have well defined your title: predator. We will know in the end that this predator is the lion, or YOU. Your analogy was really enticing. Your diction, too. And your detailed style successfully shaped the narration of the murder which was well-thought of.

It was an original step, using 'lion' vs. 'lamb'. If I didn't know the rules of the game, I wouldn't have expected the ending, for you spoke indirectly about what the prey & the predator did through the whole plot.

Only in the end, we'd get to know who is the lion and who was the lamb.

I don't know why the poem looks like this, maybe you submitted it through your phone? Please fix it :P

This is one of the finest dark pieces I have ever read on PnQ. I truly loved it, and I think it's your best one in the game!

"I don't know why the poem looks like this, maybe you submitted it through your phone? Please fix it :P"

Jeez, you're bossy :D

I talk ALOT. That's why it looks like this..I had a small space to work with :( haha.

Hopefully it looks/flows better now I edited a little!

It looks now more comfortable to the eyes :P