(When I read the title firstly I thought about Michael Jackson...)
This is a good poem.It has strange sentiment.I liked your lines!Well written!

I really enjoy how this is written. Like the beginning of a well written novel.

"Oh Peter Pan" I say allowed "why didn't you come for me? You came for Wendy. Why not me?" - LOOOVED these lines - I've thought the same damn thing. 5/5

mandy :)