Comments : Fates Collision

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Mental images
    Burned in every mind
    Hoping no one suffered
    Before they died

    This is the perfect way to end this poem.
    I reli liked this poem. Its so well expressed.
    Perfect. 5/5 keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Mental images
    Burned in every mind
    Hoping no one suffered
    Before they died

    This is the perfect way to end this poem.
    I reli liked this poem. Its so well expressed.
    Perfect. 5/5 keep writing

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you so much to both!

    • 12 years ago

      by LostWords

      Thank you so much to both!