Comments : Free to be a Tree

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    It's who I am,
    for my bark
    adorns scars,
    hearts carved
    within my mind
    of whos been here
    and gone-

    MMMM I love this!!!! I love the scars and the carved hearts, thats all I can picture when reading this, is a tree with wounds and markings on it..

    Just adore your nature pieces because they take me to a very serene place in my mind where all I envision is what youre saying, and thats amazing :)

    Loved this..

    P.s Love the shape of the woman!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love the layout of the poem, the image of a tree standing tall is what I can invision. It shows such strength I believe. An awesome write Andrea. Loved it!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I love this!!!!!

    Words.....wonderful

    Flow......perfect as always

    Buuut, this had so much confidence and strength, like a rebirth just awesome syrup xxxxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Double post :-/

    Seeeeee how excited you get me syruo!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the shape and flow of this, greatimagery as well,

    comparing bark to scars is genius and shows your eye for detail.

    excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Nicko

    Those that adore nature can't help but notice these giants that walk amongst us, with their gnarly bark and height to outwit the dinosaurs, yet with such delicate and vulnerable leaves, there is something very spiritual about the tree of life.

    A short but captivating poem...