My Midnight hours

by Mohan   Sep 12, 2012


Almost 1am
I'm sitting in the rock
Millions of stars
looks like a night flowers

Seeing the moonlight in the sea
I'm wet in this cold night
Still no idea to return my home
This may be my best sleepless night

Hearing your voice in the memories
The day you left me in this prison
Darkness surrounded me
So many foolish rainy days

So many times i realized
This world is filled with lies
But my heart is not a stone
I can't forget you easily

So many questions for myself
How you came into my life?
How you left like a lovely sunset?
Really you loved me?

So many days passed
Without a single smile
So many nights
Without a colorful dreams

Without you
I feel like an orphan
Come again
I'm ready to believe your lies

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  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    Purplerose, your critique on spelling is not all correct. The word "realized" is spelled correct in Mohan's poem. Realize is spelled with the letter "Z" not "S"

    Other than that good critique and nice poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Mohan, this is best i hv read so far frm u..
    U r creating ur own style..gud job..and i agree wid mandy ..d ending is superb.

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Such a moving write, lovely choice of words. The ending was superb! 5/5

    mandy :)

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