Don't Wake Me

by X Harlea X   Sep 12, 2012


If I'm sleeping then I'm dreaming,
Keeping my mind clear with even breathing.
Shadows of what's supposed to be,
Clears it's way from you to me.
Happiness makes it all worth while,
Unless it crashes and burns; ready for excile.

Reality makes things difficult through and through,
Making what we won't believe true.
So if you see me sleeping,
Don't wake me cause I'm dreaming.
Of the happiness that's supposed to be,
Radiating warmth through you and me.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    HI i thougt trhis poem was good i like how you are dreaming of happiness we all want that all in all great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Ive always liked poems that rhyme, and this one is definitely one of them. You did real good in writing this one, the lenght, emotions and all that. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Awesome write a lot of emotion spills out on to this page , such a great idea penned to perfection

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  • 12 years ago

    by Mister 47

    It was short , long time i did not read anything from you , the second line was a bit icky i dont know how it sounded to my ear it should be better , the meaning i liked , liked the idea of dreaming ... breathing just wanted to say , we dream so when we wake up , we make them come true , sometimes we wonder what is the dream :) our life , or our sleep :) just wondering :) great one dear :)

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