Why her not me.........:-(

by Novz   Sep 13, 2012


I give everything to you......but you doesn't care about it....
I am always there to love you......but you doesn't think of it..
Because you doesn't love me...............but her............:-(

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lyndy

    "doesn't" should be "don't"
    you could also add a bit more to it and maybe change the formatting for improvement

    just some suggestions