The message is portrayed well and clear..it just needs a bit of improvement because sometimes it feels kin of off..

nice improving talent:)

Problem shared, is half-solved for sure. Dieing in Silence, is impure. There's always one out there, who cares.

I understand sometimes it's just easier not to talk about feelings. Sometimes it hurts as bad sharing emotion as it does to suppress it. It feels more natural to not share with reality. Though I believe even writing it out helps cause some healing my opinion only. But great job expressing yourself and hopefully writing it out made you feel better.

Dope ass poem luv that pain