A Childs Hurtings (Long)

by LittleMsPink   Sep 13, 2012


Why can't you understand what im feeling
You don't even know im always weeping
Weeping upstairs without you knowing
I'm smiling outside but inside im crying

When i ask you a simple "Yes or No"
You start blabbering thing that i don't know
So sorry if sometimes i get my voice high
It's just because i get frustrated that i just can't hide

When i was a little kid your always smiling
But now when you see me, your always biding
Biding me without even talking
Don't you know inside im dying?

You must be wondering why i stopped the things
that i once do...
Maybe it's because of the word's you blew!
And when i do things that i love...
I remember your word's that brings me to stop!

I know im not really the child you dreamed
But i hope you accept me as the child you breed
Accept me for who i want to be
And love me for who ill always be

I admit im not perfect
I make mistakes that i should prevent
But don't forget it's normal for a human
So could you please stop comparing me with my friends!?

Don't think i don't love you
'Cause inside i do...
I'm just hiding it under my shoe
I don't show it 'cause you might just laugh
So i just write it up on my pad

I have so many thing's i wanted write
Those word's might give you a fright
But it won't fit in just one pad
And my ink would probably run out

So ill end this poem without further ado
I hope you knew this poem was meant for you.,

I don't know if this poem is any good
I just want to express what im feeling inside

~Shienna~
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  • 12 years ago

    by JaM

    I agree with RainyDays in regards to this stanza;

    When i ask you a simple "Yes or No"
    You start blabbering thing that i don't know
    So sorry if sometimes i get my voice high
    It's just because i get frustrated that i just can't hide

    This part really caught my attention in the matter of relating. I feel as if I could not describe those feelings as well as you did. I enjoyed the read, you could see how much of yourself you put into your writing.

    As LittleMermaid said; keep up the good spirit, and stay strong.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Silence holds all torture, captive. Awareness, is short-cut to cure.

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Well,this one is a very sad piece...you beautifully jot down your feelings.. this is full of emotions...
    Keep up the good spirit.stay strong.
    n keep sharing your poems to us!!

    :)

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