Comments : A Childs Hurtings (Long)

  • 12 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Well,this one is a very sad piece...you beautifully jot down your feelings.. this is full of emotions...
    Keep up the good spirit.stay strong.
    n keep sharing your poems to us!!

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Silence holds all torture, captive. Awareness, is short-cut to cure.

  • 12 years ago

    by JaM

    I agree with RainyDays in regards to this stanza;

    When i ask you a simple "Yes or No"
    You start blabbering thing that i don't know
    So sorry if sometimes i get my voice high
    It's just because i get frustrated that i just can't hide

    This part really caught my attention in the matter of relating. I feel as if I could not describe those feelings as well as you did. I enjoyed the read, you could see how much of yourself you put into your writing.

    As LittleMermaid said; keep up the good spirit, and stay strong.