by XxLastHopexX Sep 13, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You held me in your arms, |
by average thoughts
For as we stare into the night sky, |
by Autuumnbree
Good poem I like your choice of words, and within each line you can feel the emotions and pain that is being express. I find this poem to be sad but touching as well. I like that you use the stars because they're one of the most beautiful creation and to think of them without their brilliant lights is heartbreaking. Nice write |