Good poem I like your choice of words, and within each line you can feel the emotions and pain that is being express. I find this poem to be sad but touching as well. I like that you use the stars because they're one of the most beautiful creation and to think of them without their brilliant lights is heartbreaking. Nice write

For as we stare into the night sky,
Me swallowed in your embrace,
I haven't the heart to tell you
That I, too, am like the stars.
That the warmth of my skin,
Is but the remains of
The cold ruin that took the place of my heart.

I haven't the courage to tell you,
That like the stars in the sky,
My heart has long ago died..

I loved d end, specialy d last line.