Comments : Forbidden love

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I loved it.Nominated.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Beautiful! Not only did you use a good choice of words but the subject has a lot of depth. Only one minor note: in the beginning, I believe the word should be luminescence because you are using it as a noun and luminescent is an adjective. Totally just the essay writer in me though!

    5/5 Very good work