Comments : The Approach Point

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    This is really deep and beautiful Karla. I am not sure but I think this line:

    I would approach my hand from thy
    again and tenderly,
    where you used thy should be thine :) or thee?..

    I must have read this a dozen times. Awesome my friend~

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Missed reading your poems :)

    Beautifully written poem or should say...elegantly painted poem :)

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by LostWords

    Just to see the blue
    of your eyes collapsing
    ^^
    Don't know why but I absolutely love this line. Beautiful poem.