Comments : Tears in her eyes

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    So much sadness the girl must have felt specially after her best friend has left, you captured the sadness and the feeling of loneliness that girl is going through. it was more notorious when you mentioned the part about not having even a boat to borrow. I got the impression that she is drowning in her own sorrow.

    Well done with the challenge, I spotted the rhymes.